This weekend, I attended one of the local gov. program "writing resume in
Instructor ( korean ) gave us some printouts for a reference.
And I found these odd writings in sample sentences.
Ex 1.: "I enjoy and feel passionate about the assistant manager in the marketing which I think serves as the basis to build a successful career in your company."
Ex 2. : " Your marketing analyst is the ideal platform, in my opinion, on which I can grow as a true professional in the marketing."
what do you think about these sentences?