"Hi John,
You edited my two pieces from the _______ google groups page. At first, I was a bit overwhelmed by your comments, but I am writing to thank you for your help. This is my first ever "job" in writing, I have only ever written for personal pleasure. A good slap in the face is just what I needed to center my thinking.
I look forward to any additional editing that you do on my pieces.
Thanks again
____ "
That was refreshing.
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—John Dunphy
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